I've been sending Desolation Ghosts to agents without success for a while now. Big ask: if you started to read it and didn't finish, would you consider letting me know where it lost you and why? I am more interested in knowing how to make it better than in feeling like it's perfect, so I won't hold what you tell me against you. I have to send the first two to five chapters to the agents and I suspect that's where I'm losing people, so any help would be greatly appreciated if you are comfortable.